Communicating in Forums
By: Mike • Essay • 369 Words • January 20, 2010 • 999 Views
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He could have avoided making the mistakes by going over his response first before he posted it. Whenever I am done with a certain assignment I proof read it and ask my wife or a family member if they could proof read it for me before I post it. Whenever a person proof reads your work of course they are going to give feedback. I take whatever feedback I get and use that to better make any adjustments to my assignments. For one he should have not said it in a sexist tone at the end of his statement he said and I quote “I saw a business lady”. To me the correct way to phrase that would be business woman. I found through my experiences of life that woman don’t particularly like to be called lady. It just shows that you have no respect for the other sex. He also stated he was going to brush up on his etiquette for the some of the good old boys at the top, he automatically assumes that the people on top are men. There are an equal amount of woman “at the top” in businesses as men. Another way he could have avoided his mistakes is do research of woman in business. He would