Memorandum

18 Mar 2005

Kirsten Yates-Konzen

Nick Callahan/ ENG 1010

Essay Entitled "My Profession: Becoming a Pharmacist"

The whole writing process wasn't easy. It took a lot of time to even start constructing the essay. I had to think back to days when I was younger to get ideas. I spent hours of research on the computer looking up information to try and construct a paper. I had three drafts all together; they are almost constructed in the same way. The first two are constructed like this: they have the introduction, then the reason one would want to become a pharmacist, my plan of action, downsides and conclusion. I turned the first two in leaving out a pretty important thing, the job outlook and job description. Overall I think the final essay is written better than the first two. I fixed up on some of my problem areas. One of the areas I had the problem in is tone. I made it seem like I was talking to one of my friends. It needed to be more formal and I made it more formal. I also tend to talk