Kite Runner

Introduction paragraph:

*Hook-????

*Introduction of Khalid Hosseini- draw parallel between his own life and Amir’s. (outside source here)

*Thesis- (rough) Amir’s endeavor for true redemption within himself is ultimately meant with success.

Paragraphs-

Topic sentence- Early in the novel, Amir’s actions, or lack there of, cause a seemingly unliftable burden that he spends the rest of the novel overcoming.

CD1- Watching the rape… and doing nothing. Effect of this is a detachment to Hassan because of guilt.

Com1- In the car when they are talking about the kite tournament, Amir get sick. When the scene is over, he imagines Hassan’s pant’s laying in the alley (84).

CD2- Introduction of the dream Hassan had. “There was a monster in the lake. It had grabbed Hassan by the ankles, dragged him to the murky bottoms. I was that monster” (86).

CD3- General health goes down the hill.

Com1- “That was the night I became an insomniac” (86). “I had just half eaten my lunch…” (86). Ext.

Com1.2- His physical body as well as his mind are so overcome with guilt, he can barely function.

Topic sentence- The turning point in Amir’s attempts for rescue is when he makes the decision to travel back to Kabul.

CD1- Receives letter from Rahim Khan. He sees a way out of the guilt and a path to redemption. He takes it.

Com1-