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People want to live in a way like the person they admire most or at least to follow some of his ideal features. This estimable person could be often for example pop star, politician, or world famous man, but it can be also a member of family or a friend. Of all the influential people throughout time of my life, I admire my father most out of anyone because of his resiliency, affection for God, giving good advice.

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I personally hold a great admiration for my father because he has capability to recover readily from depression.

Example-When he was 17 years old he lost his parents. Most people in his position would be mentally broken or deprive, but he didn’t. He established his own business. He was only breadwinner of his family and raised his 6 younger sibling’s as well educated persons.

Example2-At certain time his business was not flourishing but he would not give up hope. He was going to find other ways to survive and he did. He always has a smile face despite the obstacles of real tough life. When he extremely stressed out and busy all the time he knows well how to deal with it.

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My father really deserves admiration due to his never-ending love to his creator-God.

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He always prays from core of his heart and try to establish some means of communication with God. He usually tries to lead the life the way God shows.

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He always besides the people, who is deprived, exhausted about life.