The Person That I Admire the Most in My Life

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Name: TAING SOVISAL

Class: M2.2

Lecturer: KONG VENDY

Date: 30/09/13

The Person that I Admire the Most in My Life

My mother is the most admiring person in my life. She looks a bit chubby but healthy like a wealthy woman. She has long-bronze-straight hair seem Barbie’s. Her jet-black eyes look similar to Rihanna’s. My mother also has a pointed nose which likes a European lady. Besides these appearances, she has several good personalities as well. She is a friendly person. Every time she meets neighbors or friends, she always says hi to them. Once day, my mother has met her primary school friend, but her friend didn’t recognize her. However, my mother still greets her friends firstly. My mother is also a helpful person. She often helps neighbors or siblings whenever they need. In 2004 she had helped the poor neighbor by providing them the funds to run business too. Moreover, my mother has a kind-hearted personality. When I was a child, I remembered I had my bike lost. My mother not only didn’t scold me, but also to comfort me and teach me how to safeguard the bike. On the other hand, my mother is a hard-working woman in a job. She hardly ever takes a day off in daily business, even if she was unwell or tired. As when she got flu, she still got up early and worked normally. Among these, my mother also has one interesting merit is neatness. She is very neat and well organized. Our house is always tidy. Not only the living room, but also the restroom is clean and comfortable. My mother is not only the smart businesswoman, but also the good housewife. In conclusion, I love my mother and I admire the most of her appearances and personalities.